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E.T. Allen's avatar

Thank you for the observation … so cool … the early chapters definitely start out with more exposition at the risk of not “grabbing” the reader… mirroring Paul’s external orientation to life. There is some better balance I can strike there I agree. As he goes more inward, so does the narrative style … you’re really going to enjoy the rest I think 😉

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Christina G.'s avatar

Hands down, my favorite line in this chapter is, "This was just common sense, not revelatory information from some kind of Bionic Leg Oracle." Everything in this chapter was a joy to read though. Not only is it a relief as the reader to finally follow Paul into his solution and ultimate healing for his condition, but there is a truly expansive and magical quality to Paul's revelations about the mind. His out of body dream experience was also poignant and wondrous. "Light was pulsing in and out from that heart area in waves of light, radiating out and returning in golden toroidal flows." Simply spectacular.

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