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Veronika Bond's avatar

I like how you are drawing the reader into Paul's decision making process, creating suspense by slowing down time, ending on a significant number plate on an apparently random car in a conspicuous place, and then ~ cliffhanger...

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E.T. Allen's avatar

Appreciate the encouraging comment. And thank you for all of your thoughtful words from the very start 🙏

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Veronika Bond's avatar

You're most welcome. I fiercely believe in writers rooting for each other (esp. given the sick state of the publishing industry) 💕

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