Especially those co-incidental signals in the field leading up to the crash ... "The woman next to Paul kept churning out triceps extensions, totally oblivious to the impending doom approaching her ankle."
A very promising 1st chapter (some minor editorial notes aside). And a perfect open ending. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Thanks Veronika. Having read some of your work on Synchronosophy, the core tenets of what you describe really synch up well with what I know and practice.
I’m just as curious to see how Paul’s story unfolds with you!
I got an incredible heart activation reading this... followed quickly by an empathic cringe at the memory of my own pain.
Earlier in 2023, I had a similar (though much less dramatic) ankle-crunching experience. It happened the day Uranus came into conjunction with my Ascendant. Kind of makes sense since Uranus brings sudden shock and rules Aquarius, which governs our ankles, among other things. So here I am reading your poignant story, totally enmeshed in its color and emotion, suddenly jolted back to my own still-moment-in-time. Uranus turns direct tomorrow, so I guess Coincidence Speaks indeed!
So glad you (enjoyed?) the first chapter. :) Thank you for reading and sharing your experience.
The astrological connection is fascinating. The study of how the movements of planets and stars interact with each other is a macrocosm of coincidence speaking, and I love how you bring its patterns to the microcosm of your own life. (Which is its own macrocosm!)
The whole book is crafted with electricity - specifically lightning - in mind, so it’s awesome to hear that reflected by one of its first readers!
The most curious thing to me is how we meet on this journey, coming from very different directions, gone through totally different experiences, learning our 'life's lessons' in radically different forms and expressions, and yet we recognise the resonance instantly.
You're a very descriptive writer. The monologue inside Paul's head really grips the reader, bringing them into Paul's world. Excellent build-up and way of grabbing the reader's attention out of the gate. I'll look forward to what comes next.
Ohh, exciting! Many congratulations!! 🎈 I'll be back later, with full attention, to enjoy the read.
Wow! What a great build up.
Especially those co-incidental signals in the field leading up to the crash ... "The woman next to Paul kept churning out triceps extensions, totally oblivious to the impending doom approaching her ankle."
A very promising 1st chapter (some minor editorial notes aside). And a perfect open ending. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Thanks Veronika. Having read some of your work on Synchronosophy, the core tenets of what you describe really synch up well with what I know and practice.
I’m just as curious to see how Paul’s story unfolds with you!
I got an incredible heart activation reading this... followed quickly by an empathic cringe at the memory of my own pain.
Earlier in 2023, I had a similar (though much less dramatic) ankle-crunching experience. It happened the day Uranus came into conjunction with my Ascendant. Kind of makes sense since Uranus brings sudden shock and rules Aquarius, which governs our ankles, among other things. So here I am reading your poignant story, totally enmeshed in its color and emotion, suddenly jolted back to my own still-moment-in-time. Uranus turns direct tomorrow, so I guess Coincidence Speaks indeed!
So glad you (enjoyed?) the first chapter. :) Thank you for reading and sharing your experience.
The astrological connection is fascinating. The study of how the movements of planets and stars interact with each other is a macrocosm of coincidence speaking, and I love how you bring its patterns to the microcosm of your own life. (Which is its own macrocosm!)
The whole book is crafted with electricity - specifically lightning - in mind, so it’s awesome to hear that reflected by one of its first readers!
Here we go! Excited to see where this leads and how Paul’s ankle is.
Thank you Troy. Me too.
That's beautiful.
The most curious thing to me is how we meet on this journey, coming from very different directions, gone through totally different experiences, learning our 'life's lessons' in radically different forms and expressions, and yet we recognise the resonance instantly.
You're a very descriptive writer. The monologue inside Paul's head really grips the reader, bringing them into Paul's world. Excellent build-up and way of grabbing the reader's attention out of the gate. I'll look forward to what comes next.
That’s very kind; I appreciate your feedback. :)
No problem! I'll look forward to reading more!