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Tania Tyler 🌿's avatar

Whoa, this chapter was so well done (they all are but this one was Nature). This is beautiful and something I haven't read/thought before "That day was the first day he witnessed Mother Nature breathing, as the earth sucked moisture down into the soil as the sun went down in the evening, and expressed it again in the morning dew just before sunrise on the outbreath. "

Thank you so much for the generous mention at the beginning 💜🌿

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Lor's avatar
Jul 6Edited

Now you are allowing the reader to peel the onion, so to speak. Great fun by the way. Each concentric layer carefully lifted and removed, exposing , getting ever closer to the core. I cannot even begin to guess where Paul’s new revelation will take him. Will this ultimate enlightenment be so intense he becomes more thought than being? I’m wildly all over the place in solving the mystery. Though it is obvious that you have allowed the reader to reach some sort of critical threshold, any semblance of sudden insight I have been forming, has all but vanished. So much so , that I now give myself over to the turning of each page. Cannot wait to see where it takes me next.

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